My own critique: I am working too heavily. I need to back off on intensity.
I want to loosen up some and be less calculated.
It comes down to experience, practice, and discipline. I have little experience with this medium. My time for practice is still not sufficient to build confidence nor find the techniques that work for my vision. And although I am working on establishing a routine for working weekly, the discipline is interrupted by many other factors.
It is good to be consistently working again. I move forward while learning more about this medium. It is good to push myself. There will be more to come.